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 Posted: Fri Jun 11th, 2021 05:47 pm
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These are some nice lyrics! I love the plot and the concept, and the execution too. It is simple but effective. One thing that was a tad confusing (at least to me) was what the power you mentioned in the second section stood for. Maybe that could be clarified in future lyrics if you do decide to extend this song. Or, you could keep it vague for the listener to wonder about. It is really an intriguing topic though and some solid lyrics! (Also I'm not like super experienced at all so take my advice with a grain of salt lol)

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