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 Posted: Tue Jun 1st, 2021 10:59 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Sounding good so far! really like the way you sing out on "only fire no sun" the 2nd time each chorus. Just what it needs!

I suggest putting in an instrumental before the bridge, then go into the chorus/outro as you have it.

You might experiment with repeating "only fire no sun" as a counterpoint to every line in the outro.



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