View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Thu Nov 12th, 2020 08:48 pm
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Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
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Just my two cents, but I'd go for something more poetic here. I think a horror theme allows you to be more dramatic rather than conversational in style.

Out from the darkness..
Shriek of the night bird's call..
Something of the shadows..
Sliding across the the wall

I think you've got your mood sorted, but still looking for your hook to kind of anchor it.

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