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 Posted: Thu Nov 12th, 2020 02:35 pm
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Joined: Tue Nov 27th, 2018
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Hi Joe, I like like creepy and dark, and this fits the bill. I do feel that the verses tend to say similar things. IMHO, I would cut it down to the best two and then move the story on. What happens next? You have me interested to know what the threat is, what happens to this person.

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