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 Posted: Sun Aug 23rd, 2020 03:42 am
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cmaja



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Andrea wrote:
The first verse pulled me in. I could totally picture everything happening in the story.

This is my favorite part:
"Saw you at the county fair
Smelled your perfume in the air
Selling kisses for a pricey fee
Spit the straw from between my teeth
Threw all my money on the counter there"

I love the turn around at the end. Guess I should have been ready for that :( Nice write


Thanks, Andrea... I look forward to your reviews. I had this plan of doing a lyric with a title that seems straightforward but isn’t. Like a mystery movie, that when you think you understand it, it changes. Kinda fun. Thanks for the compliment.

Charles



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