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 Posted: Sat Aug 15th, 2020 12:16 pm
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M.P. Dudash



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I really like this one. Great rhyming throughout. Only little thing I see is change the line some guys just buy girls a drink to some guys just buy drinks. I don’t feel it necessary as in the next line girls are mentioned. Probably one of my favorites that you have written. I was that first guy for many years, probably why we write such different styles.😂



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