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 Posted: Thu Aug 13th, 2020 12:29 am
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RainyDayMan



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I feel like there is a change of tone between verse 1 and the rest.
Verse 1 feels more casual and light-hearted, whereas after that it's more intense and an all out love song.
And both are fine individually, but they don't seem to fit together.

The music and the way it's sung might bring it together.



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