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 Posted: Thu Jul 30th, 2020 10:41 pm
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MASempine



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I've learned (from visits to Another Forum) to watch for certain key words. I think CMAJA means well but "needs tightening up" is the word they use at the other place to mean "let me help you ruin your song."

There they use technical writing good practices and journalistic good practices to strip your verse of its personality--of its character--of its "YOU"

I'm glad you didn't change your lyrics. They were "close enough to perfect" for me.



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