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 Posted: Thu Jul 30th, 2020 04:02 pm
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Andrea

 

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I like "a heart like mine". It made me smile.

The only lines I got caught on were the first 2 in this verse. They don't seem to connect smoothly from the previous verse. The idea is good - here is an idea I had. I was a little unsure of the rhyme scheme.

Like Him I reach out to others - now I try to be like Him
If You know they’re hurting just be kind - follow in his teachings and his guidelines
He could calm the storm and heal the blind
Imagine what He’s done with a heart like mine



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