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 Posted: Tue Jul 14th, 2020 02:46 pm
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I like the structure here too. Each verse touches on a different story or message - it's nice.

All the verses are different except
Our God is - Balaam’s God and Our God is - Daniel’s God. I would probably change one of these so they are not the same.

Also, I may not be reading this right but am not sure of the use of Him in line 3. To me it makes sense if it was not there.

Our God is - Peter’s God
Though he denied our Lord
Chose Him to preach His word
Our God is - Peter’s God



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