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 Posted: Mon Apr 6th, 2020 01:04 am
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RainbowKeeper



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Bonjour, your Text reminded me of a very strong and great poem. Dunno if you know it?!

Footprints in the sand
One night I dreamed a dream.
As I was walking along the beach with my Lord.
Across the dark sky flashed scenes from my life.
For each scene, I noticed two sets of footprints in the sand,
One belonging to me and one to my Lord.

After the last scene of my life flashed before me,
I looked back at the footprints in the sand.
I noticed that at many times along the path of my life,
especially at the very lowest and saddest times,
there was only one set of footprints.

This really troubled me, so I asked the Lord about it.
"Lord, you said once I decided to follow you,
You'd walk with me all the way.
But I noticed that during the saddest and most troublesome times of my life,
there was only one set of footprints.
I don't understand why, when I needed You the most, You would leave me."

He whispered, "My precious child, I love you and will never leave you
Never, ever, during your trials and testings.
When you saw only one set of footprints,
It was then that I carried you."

I like your lyrics a lot. They seem to show us something personal of you....
The only thing I personally would change a little is

„Sing alleluia, sing praise„... somehow it seems a little to short to me, so that I would change the , into an „and“...or would change it to: sing and praise... just a Suggestion but I think it would give this line a little more „air to breath“....
You write great stuff....I told you before hu? 😉
Keep on using your great gift!

Yours
RK



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