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 Posted: Wed Dec 11th, 2019 11:19 am
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jamestoffee



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Great sound and delivery.

Production-wise, one nit pick it having reverb that much on the vocals and not on the instruments gives a bit artificial feel....maybe play around with that aspect.

I became a big fan of BIAB with the 2019 ultra and waiting to upgrade to 2020 during their sales this month.

Lyrically, it keeps a nice focus on the main idea.

One nitpick would be this line:

Show all my cards, IF that's the only way.

Adding the word "if" makes showing all the cards as a last resort. Otherwise, it comes across as the only way she knows how to show interest/ play is to always show all her cards...which may be why she is not in a relationship....still works as is though.

Thanks for sharing.

James



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