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 Posted: Mon Dec 2nd, 2019 08:50 pm
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cmaja



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Okay Bunny, you corrected line 3 of the first verse. Now its ready for the music. Good verse to verse rhyming in the third line. Great transition from verse to chorus. ‘Ho-ome’ is a nice twist. I really like this!

Charles



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