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 Posted: Sun Nov 10th, 2019 12:48 am
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Andrea

 

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Thanks so much Owen and Bunny. Surprisingly, changing the rhyming scheme wasn't as difficult as I first thought it would be. I think it is definitely better this way.

I used the alternative choices you both chose, as they were almost identical.

I still feel there are more changes I could make, but this is improving so much!



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