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 Posted: Sat Nov 9th, 2019 07:55 pm
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RainyDayMan



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You did well with the altered rhyming scheme Andrea! It all still flows smoothly as a story.

In terms of the alternatives you've listed, I cast my vote for:
I was born with all the right tools
Cloak and dagger superstars

Nice job on the rewrite!



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