|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Sat Nov 9th, 2019 07:55 pm||
|You did well with the altered rhyming scheme Andrea! It all still flows smoothly as a story.
In terms of the alternatives you've listed, I cast my vote for:
I was born with all the right tools
Cloak and dagger superstars
Nice job on the rewrite!