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 Posted: Sat Nov 9th, 2019 05:50 pm
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Hi Owen, I have made revisions based on your suggestions. I think I managed to change the rhyme scheme. I also made changes to a few smaller items. I hope it sounds better. As always, I'll keep tweaking as needed. Thank you for all you help.



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