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 Posted: Fri Nov 8th, 2019 08:13 pm
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Snowman wrote:
This was nice. I tried singing it (out of key of course). Keeping country in mind, I found a few words here or there that can be changed, without losing the interpretation. BUT, that's my interpretation of the lyrics.

The one thing I've noticed on some of these music sites is, writers try to fit words in, and lose a coherent melody. This could fall into that category.

Overall, put your music to it. It's good to go.



Thanks Snowman for reading and the feedback. I would love to hear your suggestions for word changes. I am not well versed in Country, as rock and sometimes pop are my usual genre. Having music for these will most likely have to come from help from someone else, so I appreciate any advice. Enjoy



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