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 Posted: Wed Nov 6th, 2019 11:55 am
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bunnythesinger



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Andrea, RDM addressed the little things I would have looked at..and I like his idea of the line 2 rhyme across the song. This is a really fun and nice foray into country. I like it a lot. I can hear it.. Glad to see you dipping your toe into the country pond. From what I can see, you should jump right in...Great chorus, by the way.
Great write.

Bunny

Last edited on Wed Nov 6th, 2019 11:57 am by bunnythesinger



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