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 Posted: Sat Oct 6th, 2018 11:51 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Nice! Love the interplay of sounds. The bass line is my favourite, but the guitar is very cool too. And I like the pauses there at the "Big Daddy" lines.

Perhaps tone the cymbals down on the percussion? I like the overall groove, and the extra whistles and percussion but those cymbals feel like they cut through too strongly for me.

Are you doing some FX on the vocals? It fits well with the overall tone.

I like the ending too, those drumbeats to go out on work really well.

Nicely done Steve!



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