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That's a direct quote of a comment rob made on one of my songs months ago. I repost it here in the hope of triggering some self-awareness.
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As clear as a white robe and a burning cross, thanks!
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Interesting idea to have a narrator paranoid about someone cutting the god queue - as if the salvation is going to run out before the narrator gets there. It could do with another verse or something, rather than just repeating so much at the end…
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"The subjective standards of sound and music quality are quite narrow. This is why if you listen to any major radio stations all the music, without exception, meets a very high standard of quality parameters. Some people can create professional s…
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Right, so you do in fact believe that non-whites are holding down the whites. No further questions.
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"And if you're white you won't go very far"?
What's the point of that line? Unless you actually believe that white people in particular are suffering at the expense of some other colored group or groups of people who are living the high …
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I mean, "the land of Milk and Money" alone wins the day as far as I'm concerned. That's a fantastic line!
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Nice one. I always like hearing what you've got cooking.
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Thanks for the listen, @ChrisPrice. Interesting observation about the ending. I couldn't figure out how to end…
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@OutOfTowner I really like this one. Great melody line and I love the bouncing rhythm. I can imagine a b…
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The passion of the lyric definitely reads like an anthem, or something to rile up a crowd before storming the gates! Looking forward to hearing what you do with the melody, instrumentation, etc.
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Great sounding guitar licks on this one, and the weather metaphor keeps giving and giving. Nicely done!
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So does "Born in the USA…
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This is really cool. The delivery of the verses reminds me of Street Legal-era Dylan...while the lyrics remind me of Saved-era Dylan 😄
Well done, all around.
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This has good bones musically and lyrically, but I agree with RDM that a more defined change (either new chords, different melody and/or different tempo) would keep it giving more to the listener throughout.
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I love this as a topic for a song - the longing for the polar opposite of what the outside currently provides. Your lyrics and music express it all very well. I agree with Sid that the vocals could do with moving up more in the mix. Some lines…
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Sweet guitar on this one. I love the vibe.
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I love that song. Incid…
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Cheers, @RainyDayMan
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That's a heavy one, @HummerWisdom. It sounds honest and sensitive, and to me those two elements get a so…
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Great song. "We'll get drunk and admit our crimes" is the line that jumped out at me the most - but they're all fantastic.
Your vocal melody is strong, too. This might be my favorite of yours so far.
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Really well done, @RainyDayMan . Powerful lyrics, and the perfect simple instrumentation to support them. I …
Kim Deal (of The Pixies, The Breeders, The Amps) has a solo album that just came out, and I am utterly enchanted by the title track: Nobody Loves You More
in What are you listening to? Comment by mattyoung December 2024
Thanks, @sidshovel. I can see how reading the lyrics first might suggest a Positively 4th Street kinda vibe. …
I was referring to his 60+ years of writing masterpieces.
Another fantastic tune, @OutOfTowner.
I really like the whistling opening, and it transitions very…
Good song all around: lyrics, guitar, performance. "Nothin' but crumbs" is a great line.
Thank you everyone for listening and for the kind words. @RainyDayMan - good point. I always forget the fact…
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