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        <pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2026 14:16:40 +0000</pubDate>
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        <title>Behind the mind (Remix)</title>
        <link>http://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/2219/behind-the-mind-remix</link>
        <pubDate>Fri, 28 Nov 2025 18:16:21 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>bhengen</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Words Me; music - Suno</p><p>This is a remix from a previous song. I like this version better.</p><p><a href="https://suno.com/s/6HLytMfnaRNmuCI6" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://suno.com/s/6HLytMfnaRNmuCI6</a></p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>You're looking in my mind</p><p>I don't want you to find</p><p>I don't want you to see</p><p>What hides inside me</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>Now you've opened the door</p><p>Exposing my rotting core</p><p>What creeps in these hallways</p><p>Are twisted demons at play</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 3]</p><p>My rooms are filled with gloom</p><p>One feels like an ancient tomb</p><p>Locked and tossed the key</p><p>No longer desired memories</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 4]</p><p>Face pulled by metal strings</p><p>Seized by rusty cogs and springs</p><p>Face frozen as a warped smile</p><p>From years of constant denial</p><p><br /></p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>My mask conceals what is found</p><p>Silent voices of tortured sounds</p><p>Mocking me at my very core</p><p>Taunting me from behind the door</p><p><br /></p><p>[Outro]</p><p>Now time for you to go, </p><p>Nothing more to show</p><p>Things that can't be said</p><p>Etched deep in my head</p><p>I don't want you to see</p><p>That my true reality</p><p>Is, I'll never be freed</p>]]>
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        <title>Paradoxed Insanity</title>
        <link>http://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/2096/paradoxed-insanity</link>
        <pubDate>Sat, 20 Sep 2025 22:16:39 +0000</pubDate>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p>Words Me; Music suno</p><p>I took the song Lost in the Labyrinth and reworked it to fit and Drum &amp; Bass Acid house beat</p><p><br /></p><p>I'm not sure which version sounds better:</p><p><a href="https://suno.com/s/UAnr0DnDrRvT6JvO" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://suno.com/s/UAnr0DnDrRvT6JvO</a></p><p>or </p><p><a href="https://suno.com/s/viDDSh0ChaohxTaw" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://suno.com/s/viDDSh0ChaohxTaw</a></p><p><br /></p><p>[Intro]</p><p>White turns black,</p><p>Can't turn back</p><p>White turns black,</p><p>Can't turn back</p><p>Never back, never back, never back</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 1]</p><p>Wandering dim hallways</p><p>Energy deprived kinetic</p><p>Mind a maze of pathways</p><p>Erratic, sporadic, frenetic</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Mind clouded hazed</p><p>Paradoxed insanity</p><p>Brain fractured dazed</p><p>Shattered memories</p><p><br /></p><p>[Verse 2]</p><p>My mirrored reflection </p><p>I once known</p><p>Distorted introspection</p><p>Blurred images shown</p><p><br /></p><p>[Bridge]</p><p>I feel the darkness</p><p>Coursing my veins</p><p>Lost in the abyss</p><p>Emptiness remains</p><p><br /></p><p>[Chorus]</p><p>Mind clouded hazed</p><p>Paradoxed insanity</p><p>Brain fractured dazed</p><p>Shattered memories</p><p><br /></p><p>[Outro]</p><p>Heartbeat constricts</p><p>Each breath shallow, </p><p>Last exhale evicts</p><p>My soul follows</p><p>Into the abyss</p>]]>
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        <title>Obvious (Original song)</title>
        <link>http://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/432/obvious-original-song</link>
        <pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2024 00:26:10 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>mr_octopus</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://www.mixcloud.com/mr_octopus/obvious/" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://www.mixcloud.com/mr_octopus/obvious</a></p><p><br /></p><p>Lyrics:</p><p>I've been thinking about you</p><p>When are you gonna leave me too?</p><p>Or should that be obvious?</p><p>I've got nothing to run to</p><p>When are you gonna leave me too?</p><p>Or should that be obvious?</p><p><br /></p><p>I'm floating in a fishbowl</p><p>Floundering weak and lazily</p><p>Plastic castle turning green</p><p>And every day I'm wishful that I'll escape</p><p>And find the sea</p><p>That you swim in so bravely</p><p><br /></p><p>Needing to believe</p><p>Finding out I'm on my own</p><p>Pouring out of me</p><p>All these tears of mine</p><p><br /></p><p>I don't know who to talk to</p><p>All of it starts to sound the same</p><p>A little too obvious</p><p>I keep trying to push through</p><p>Scrubbing and scrubbing at the stain</p><p>But still it's so obvious</p><p><br /></p><p>I'm floating in a fishbowl</p><p>Hurtling through the galaxy</p><p>With the dust and space debris</p><p>You're shrinking in the background</p><p>Getting too small for me to see</p><p>Moving on and feeling free</p><p><br /></p><p>Needing to believe</p><p>Finding out I'm on my own</p><p>Pouring out of me</p><p>All these tears of mine</p><p><br /></p><p>Needing to believe</p><p>Finding out I'm on my own</p><p>Pouring out of me</p><p>All these tears of mine</p><p><br /></p><p>Needing to believe</p><p>Finding out I'm on my own</p><p>Pouring out of me</p><p>All these tears of mine</p>]]>
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        <title>Believe</title>
        <link>http://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/162/believe</link>
        <pubDate>Tue, 04 Apr 2023 11:01:51 +0000</pubDate>
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        <dc:creator>CorkingCrackBand</dc:creator>
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        <description><![CDATA[<p><a href="https://on.soundcloud.com/ujj9q" rel="nofollow noreferrer ugc">https://on.soundcloud.com/ujj9q</a></p><p>A song from a couple of weeks back.</p><p><br /></p><p>Believe</p><p><br /></p><p>A hundred miles have passed without a change of light</p><p>The snow is melting fast - the ground turns green from white</p><p>We take our turns to watch for life upon the hills</p><p>Sleeping before our dreams are gone</p><p>Lost without our wills</p><p><br /></p><p>You close your eyes again</p><p>When you open them everything has changed</p><p><br /></p><p>Believe</p><p>This does not have to be</p><p>Believe</p><p>Our minds are floating free</p><p>Believe</p><p>The Sun will come again</p><p>Believe</p><p>We can grow through the pain</p><p><br /></p><p>Hold an Angels hand and see the sky at night</p><p>Float across the land until you see a blight</p><p>Then fall back down to earth and land without a sound</p><p>You know there’s going to be another day</p><p>Try and find another way.</p><p><br /></p><p>You close your eyes again</p><p>And when you open them everything has changed</p><p><br /></p><p>Oh</p><p>A kiss can’t make it better</p><p>Oh</p><p>Your love won’t pull us through</p><p>Oh</p><p>Don’t write the world a Dear John letter</p><p>Oh</p><p>Just show us all what we can do.</p><p><br /></p><p>Believe</p><p>This does not have to be</p><p>Believe</p><p>Our minds are floating free</p><p>Believe</p><p>The Sun will come again</p><p>Believe</p><p>We can grow through the pain</p><p><br /></p><p>You close your eyes again</p><p>And when you open them everything has changed</p>]]>
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