The Woman on the Bridge
This one is an old one... But today I am lost in memories... and I wanted to rescue it from my own oblivion
I look at the clock and I wonder
why why why
The hours go by
without anyone stopping them
why why
I look atthe sky
flying drops dress the mist
that transforms
the streets and the corners
in undulating shapes
under under under
a thousand veils of doubts
of doubts
It's already late for you to come
but no matter
I'll have a coffee
looking at th river that carries
the lost dreams
I'll sip it slwly
as if I drank you
and stir the sugar
withot thinnking of anything else
and not be a prisoner
of the emptiness that you leave me
Comments
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Sounds good Mora , Cool hook
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" a thousand veils of doubts" is a lovely line and says so much.
I really like your use of voice effects on this song. It gives such a specific atmosphere. You mix has such a unique balance and your use of percussion is absolutely elite. There's so much happening but it never feels crowded - rather like I'm walking through an undiscovered world and trying to take everything in at once.
This might be one of my favourite lyrics of yours. It captures so much without wasting a word - real poetry.
Lastly the video is one of the best I've seen. It visualises things effectively without distracting from the music but, rather, complimenting it.
CCB
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Very cool song and video, Mora! I love the vibe! Nice work as usual! 😀
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Very much your style! The vocal FX is probably the thing I noticed more on this track.
Lovely mood and vibe as usual!
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Another gem, Mora.
I really enjoy your visual approach to your music.
And I love the sound of your voice on this.1 -
Hola Elvis!!!!
Gracias!!! Always so kind, I appreciate your comments!
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Thank you so much!!! Each song and video are a challenge for me and I looooove challenge!!! Even if I don't reach nothing interesting it's good the tie I used trying it!!
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Very good description of how it feels to wait for someone. Really good background music, hypnotic.
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always a cool trip watching/listening to your art. so unique and creative!
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Very atmospheric, as always, and a really cool video. I had some difficulty making out the lyric when you sang it, which is a pity because it's very interesting. I don't think it's your accent (which makes the whole thing sound more intriguing) but the reverb and layering, which produces a great sound but makes it hard to make out the words. I think I've suggested this before, but maybe you should consider putting the lyrics at the bottom of the screen. Your songs are a visual experience as well as one of sound, and the lyric is every bit as important as the melody or even more so, so I don't think this would be inappropriate.
Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Another classic track Mora. I don't usually like auto-tune but it works really well on your voice. I love the guitar work on this track. One my favourites I think. I really enjoyed this one.😀
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Olé!!! Gracias @icystorm Much appreciated!
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Hola @RainyDayMan
Yes, I used an autotune here but just as a color on the voice. Teak you very much and have a nice week end
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I love this song. It feels so easy going, but the situation is a bit more uneasy. Again, your lyrics say so much without overdoing it. The last verse is absolutely brilliant. The guitar is wonderful, and the vocals offer a perfect vibe. I think this is one of my favorites!
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Gracias @samiamiamsam
I love this song, I did it in a very special moment in my life!!
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Gracias @ChrisPrice
This song is one of my favorites, I love lyrics here and the hook!!! Stay well
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Hola @Andrea
Sí, estoy de acuerdo, I think this is one of my favorites.
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Very poetic , Nice job Mora
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Hola @ElvisNash
Yes, this song was born from a poem of mine!! Air is full of possibilities hahaha
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