Dancing in the rain
I have been a little ill, I still am, and sometimes the tiredness of the fight makes my mood dark... I tell you this so that you understand what I mean when I talk about the fog chasing me...
I think that many of you have been ill at some point in your life and that it will be easy for you to identify with the story even though here I speak of others, of those cemeteries that the war fills with crosses that, being so many, become anonymous.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhCysPaEkuU
Today it rains in the field of the dead
while I walk reading their names
writen in chalk on crosses of blackboardd
landscape that life
planted in my soul
and that I leave behind
dacing in the rain
to feel me alive
despite the graves
despite their voices
calling me
I dance I dance
for them
for me
the fog is chasing me
dense cloud that does not fly
but is enough to hide any meaning
and while I walk
I feel devored
by the shadow of what can't be changed
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba First of all, I wish you strength as you face your health challenge. I hope you feel much better very quickly and make a full recovery. Keep up the good fight and get well soon! 💪
As for your song, In The Rain, it has your characteristic Euro-pop-funk sound. I love it! The bass, percussion, and synths stand out well. The lyrics are well-composed and weave a complex story of how death stalks us and haunts us. My favorite lines are:
I dance I dance for them for me the fog is chasing me
Your vocals are cool, interesting, and great as usual. The production and mix are clear. Your video paints a vivid interpretation of the story you sing in your song. I enjoyed listening and watching! Nice work! Get well soon and stay well, Mora! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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This is a real rhythmic piece. Very much suited to dancing, in the rain or otherwise!
Hope you can chase that fog away soon.
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Grscias!!! Much appreciated @icystorm
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Another great track Mora. A fog may be chasing you, but I actually found this song quite uplifting. There's some great vocal fx happening here. Nice guitar break too.
Hope you feel better soon.😀
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"And while I walk
I feel devoured
by the shadow of what can't be changed"
Those are some superb lyrics, Mora. Brava!
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@icystorm @RainyDayMan @ChrisPrice
Thank you so much, I think it has an interesting vibration.
(I probably shouldn't have mentioned anything about my health but... a little relief )
Yes, I love too these lines, very descriptive. Thank you, much appreciated.
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba You're very welcome, and it's good to read that you are a little better. I look forward to hearing a new song from you soon! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Well, there's not much left, thanks!!! Next week everything will have already happened... or started... Thank you so much for your so nice and warm words.
Mora
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