These Blues Are Gonna Kill Me
SUNO: https://suno.com/song/ad887d1b-dcbc-4137-bc71-0071caf781d0
ORIGINAL: https://jumpshare.com/share/1VSKMNQuFM1WvQASLQzp
THESE BLUES ARE GONNA KILL ME
[Verse 1]
Woke up this morning
In the bright sunshine
Woke up with your clouded love on my mind
Well you broke my heart last night
And no matter how hard I pray
I know these blues are gonna kill me someday
[Verse 2]
Went out on the road
Because I may as well make some time
Went out but solely you
Fogging up my mind
No matter how hard I try to work
And earn my pay
I know these blues are gonna kill me someday
[Chorus]
Girl I'm all out of blues
Since I heard the news
Well I can't let it go
And I think that you know
And that's the arrow through my heart
[Guitar Solo]
[Verse 3]
Went to bed
Trying to leave yesterday behind
Heard your voice on the phone
On the other end of the line
Well I just hung it up
'Cause I don't have no more to say
'Cause I know these blues are gonna kill me someday
Yeah these blues are gonna kill me someday
Comments
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The music sounds good to me, but and there's always a but, the lyrics to me is lacking something...
Good Luck
Tex
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I was expecting a blues style from the title. Caught me off guard. Not a problem though, just a surprise
I enjoyed this. Got an upbeat energy to it. Which seems a bit at odds with the lyric though! If I read that right, this is a breakup song.
There's a bit more edge to the "I know these blues are gonna kill me someday" line, but even that isn't a wail.
But a real easy song to just sit back and enjoy.
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i like the how you put title line at the end of verse, then did something different on the chorus.
one small thing i noticed. "i'm all out of blues" if he is out, he doesn't have them any more so how are they gong to kill him? .
nice sound and melody.
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Since I heard the news. What news did she find a new bf ? great groove man
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Yes indeed, a great groove. If I didn't know otherwise I'd say you have a great guitar player on board. I only listened to the AI version this time so I didn't fall into the trap of comparing it to the original. I need to analyze what I hear and forget how it was made and I'm liking this a lot. It has a really good structure and is easy to listen to. I enjoyed that.
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