Frozen Ground
Lyrics : Me | Music : Suno
All comments and feedback appreciated
https://suno.com/s/lQGSQb6WNIHEWI1z
(Mmmmm..)
Verse 1
Frost frozen, blades of grass
Like quills from, a porcupine’s back
Crunch beneath, the soles of my feet
each step moves you, farther from me
Crimson maple leaves, whirl in the wind
Pins of ice, prick my weathered skin (oooohhh)
[pre chorus]
Tears bleed, from my eyes
Forced on my last, legs of life
Down a cold avenue
My only thoughts are of you…
[Chorus]
Beneath this frozen ground
The wild rose whispers, in a tundra town
November will turn its back again
Wait for the sound of a Ruby Crown
That is when, I will join…. (you)
Beneath this frozen ground
[verse 2]
White wolves gnaw, at the road
Sharp teeth, of the bitter cold
55 years in the spring
A meeting only time will bring
I remember our last kiss
But forget when winter, pounds its fist
[Pre chorus]
Try to hide from, stares at my back
Inside my coat, like a hermit crab
Eyes closed, my chest still pounds…(for you)
[Chorus 2]
Beneath this frozen ground
What’s left? Just a memory
Words leave my mouth, but not aloud
November will turn, its back again
Wait for the sound, of a Ruby Crown
That is when, I will join… (you)
Beneath this frozen ground
[Bridge]
Preacher said you went home, to the Lord
Blessed, on angel wings you soar….
Beyond the clouds, is it true?
I watched as they put you….
[Final Chorus]
Beneath this frozen ground
Alone I lay awake, Cast away
In a sea of silence I drown
November turns it’s back again
Hear the sound, of a Ruby Crown
This is when, I will join… (you)
Buried Beneath this frozen ground
[Outro-Fade Out]
(Buried)…this frozen ground… (mmmm)
(Buried)…this frozen ground… (ooh)
(Buried)…this frozen ground …(mmmm)..
Comments
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powerful song. very moving. anybody who's ever lost someone can relate. Well done :)
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Thank you 😊
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Great song - the lyric sets up a nice scansion the melody can easily follow
It would hit harder maybe if it was 1 minute shorter - hard to control on SUNO but maybe look at places to edit
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Pretty poetic , with great poetic lines . it's a tad long at 5 minutes , if you're concerned with radio time max at 4 minutes
Sounds good . You can control it . Shorten it to 4 minutes . Its be faster BPMS to get there
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Thanks guys. Yeah it is longer than I intended. I might try and tweak it and make a "radio version". When I got the idea I made it my goal to use a lot of poetic phrasing and imagery. 👍️😁
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This is wonderful! So sad and evocative. Love the opening verse with its visuals, and it just stays good all the way through.
And Suno has picked up the power in it. Good match there too.
One to be proud of!
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Thank you!😃
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Great lyrics and a really powerful musical arrangement. Forgive me, I'm always curious to know how much input you have when it comes to the music when you use Suno. That's not a negative in any way...I'm just interested. Great song.
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Thank Chris!
for this one i plugged in the lyrics and styles and ran a few iterations but it wasn't getting the rhythm the way i wanted. i sung the 1st verse thru chorus with my wonderful mono tone singing voice. then ran it as a cover, it was 90% there then the last 9% took a lot of time in edit mode re-running little spots it got wrong. then run it through cover mode again to remove the cuts and smooth it out. depending on the severity of mistakes it makes i keep re-covering the song or do parts in edit mode (10-50 times until i like it). there is usually about 1% i just have to settle for close enough. maybe there is a better way but so far that is how i have been getting it to work.
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