simulation
Hi
Here is a new song i have done
Its in a pop EDM style
https://soundcloud.com/subvibe-958077223/simulation
Thanks for taking the time to Listen
subvibe
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Hey Subvibe ,Cool EDM song . The autotune works
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Drops of glass here wrapping a so nice sound in vocal!!!! I enjoyed it a lot, vowed good production!!! with a plus, a little journey through various style atoms!!! Loooove trumpet!!!
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I left you a comment on your soundcloud acct. This is a really good song In my opinion.
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This is a wee bit out of the genres I normally listen to. But.. the melody of this song reached out and grabbed me. Truly superior stuff. And good music is like that... I may not become an EDM fan, but the melody is a standout. I haven't heard your other songs, but if they are as melodic as this one, you have a gift.
Well done.
No crits here.
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Thanks for listening & your kind words
most of my stuff is laid back... A one trick pony so to say
its not a style i listen to much But i enjoy doing it
Thx
subvibe
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Can't comment on the lyrics as they aren't posted, but to me, from an edm standpoint this doesn't pop. I would skip this track and move on to the next. it has a cool vibe, and the vocals are good, but it needs something like steel drums to give the song depth.
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Hi @bhengen
Thanks for listening & your comments
not sure where i could put steel drums ?
i am already on the next song FYI
Plug me in
Reality starting to glow
Now im losing track
Losing track of what I know
Images bend
Pixels collide
Is this the truth or is it a ride
See you underneath the digital skies
So enter simulation
Where nothings ever real
Living in a good vibration
Telling you how to feel
Lost in the simulation
Wires running
Deep beneath my skin
Yeah I dont remember
Where the machine ends
And where I begin
subvibe
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Your prompt is pop, pop and edm are two different genres. Pop is about the melody and lyrics,
edm is more about the beat and rhythm. edm is geared towards making people dance,
Here is an example using your lyrics. - https://suno.com/s/xm9nzfm8xvkofCMO
Do you mind if I remix this? the lyrics are strong but need to be tightened up a bit. I have an idea where this could go.
Looking forward to hearing what you have next. :)
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