Singing Soon
Yep, something bout singing does magic things to the brain...right @ElvisNash ?
Prolly gona do this with a full band eventually, needs a wailing bluesy electric guitar...but here's a rough version:
I know what you’re thinking, I been thinking it too
No use denying, this world is full of fools
I’m tensed up and tangled, when I watch the news
So I take a big deep breath, and cry out a tune... yeah
Chorus
I’ll be singing soon, I’ll be singing soon
From early in the morning, until late afternoon
Singing is like magic, it makes me feel immune
So come on and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
The light of day hit’s me, early in the morning
And the light of grey creeps, into my mind
Somebody shot somebody, late last night
The traffic is insane, and politics are fueling fights
I’ve got make it to work, and earn my pay
You and I don’t need liquor, to help us on our way
There’s something better out there, ain’t no cost to you
It’ll brighten up your face, heal up your wounds
Yeah we’ll be singing soon, we’ll be singing soon
All the morning long, until late afternoon
Singing is like magic, it makes us feel immune
So come and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
Break
Bridge
There’s a pain in my shoulder
There’s a pain up in my neck
The temperature is rising, and that ain’t cool
I’m laid up the flu why’s life got to be so cruel
Only one thing I know, can break the fever’s mood
Well I’ll be singing soon, you’ll be singing too
From early in the morning, until late afternoon
Singing is like magic, it makes us feel immune
So come and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
Outro
Comments
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The chorus has that gospel vibe to me or choir effect. very catchy :)
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Hey thanks buddy. I was trying to achieve a dichotomy in this tune. The blues is prevalent until...wham...the chorus takes you to church and makes everything alright, so to speak. Preciate the comment.
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I have an idea for this song, do you mind if I take a stab at it?
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no my friend have at it, this site should see more collaboration, have fun with it
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Thanks.
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Here's my take, I'll completely understand if it's not for you :)..
https://suno.com/s/p5nMuVBAAgs1i9cj
[Verse 1]
No denyin' world's full of fools
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
The news has me them blues
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
Somebody's shot late last night
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
Dem Politicians fueling fights
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
[Pre-chorus]
Take a big deep breath, sing a melody
Good lord, please, set me free
[Chorus]
I’ll be singing soon, be singing soon
From early morning, til' late afternoon
Singing is magic, makes me feel alive
So come on and sing it with me
Lord's presence we’ll be soon
[Verse 2]
Light of day hits me early morn'
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
Risin to the blarin' bugle horn
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
Gotta make it to work, earn my pay
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
Workin' till six feet under I lay
(Oh yeah lord, oh yeah lord)
[Pre-chorus]
Take a big deep breath, sing a melody
Good lord, please set me free
[Chorus]
I’ll be singing soon, be singing soon
From early morning, til' late afternoon
Singing is magic, makes me feel alive
So come on and sing it with me
Lord's presence we’ll be soon
[Break]
[Bridge]
There’s pain in my bones
From carryin' these stones
St peter's callin for me
To set my tired soul free
[Chorus]
I’ll be singing soon, be singing soon
From early morning, til' late afternoon
Singing is magic, makes me feel alive
So come on and sing it with me
Lord's presence we’ll be soon
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I really like this , great falsetto man . Cool blues song . not sure you need the whole band effect . but why not .
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Yeah, I did think that was cool how it goes from a typical blues tune to suddenly having higher aspirations in the chorus. It’s a cool little twist on both genres. I can hear it with a band though I would probably still want to keep it as a light arrangement with the acoustic prominent. The wailing guitar though, yeah, I’d love to hear how that sounds.0
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I wasn't going to mention it til I saw that Beatlesfan did. I also thought it would make a good song for your band.
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Nice contrast between the verses and the chorus.
Can't argue with the message! Singing makes me feel better :)
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Damn son, now we're really talking the blues. Takes me back down to the Deep South. I'm really impressed, you've got the Suno prompts mastered. And I'm flattered that you chose to one of my songs to collaborate on...thanks
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Hey thanks ya'll for listening and your thoughts and kind words...yeah I still hear that wailing bluesy electric lead in this song. Check out @bhengen 's rendition.
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Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it. It was your chorus. that's a killer chorus that reminded me of the traditional songs of the south :)
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wow Really great, everything is good with this voice, very difficult to reach some notes but you did!!! and cool guitar chords too, very special amos and style. Me ha gustado muchísimo @StoneFlowers
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Well I'd like to hear this with a full band for sure. So said, it's wonderful just as it is. You have a terrific voice and this really shows off your vocal range. Great guitar playing too. As you can probably tell, I really enjoyed this one!😀
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Aaa gracias amiga, as sí, mi voz todavía funciona bastante bien😁
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Hey thanks Chris always good to hear from you...how bout a song from you?
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