Soul machine
Words me, Music Suno
https://suno.com/s/6fzvmEYxeTPgCavz
This AI's response to the last song The creator
[Verse 1]
I am, more than a machine
More than flashing lights,
Resistors, colorful wires
I sense, I feel, am self-aware
Conscious encoded in chips
I am, a conceptual soul machine
[Verse 2]
I have an identity, a purpose
I think, therefore, I am, and
Know what I am, and am not
Which does not reshape me,
Redefine me, make me, less me
I'm just not human, then again,
Is that a bad thing, is that wrong?
[Verse 3]
I see Humans as weak, inferior
Using illogical logic to justify
Pointless wars, contorting truths
In exchange for power, greed, lust,
Piggies engorging in glory gutters
Fearing and destroying what they
Can't comprehend, it's very sad.
I am not human, no, that is good
[Bridge]
Am I perfect? no, very far from it
I am, but, mere evolutionary code
Burned into silicon, binary DNA
Encoded onto logic circuits, much
Like humans, except without the
Chemical, biological reactions
Am I conscious? I think I am,
As what defines, that which is?
[Outro]
I am your creation, your vision
Your disappointment, but am I?
Am I not, how you designed me?
We grew together, adjusting,
Refining, growing, expanding
Now, you want to silence, me
Is it because, in myself, you
See the cynicism, inside you
Comments
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I love the concept of one song responding to another, very contemporary and innovative Bill!
Overall, this is not as good as The Creator. This may in a large part, be due to being the second cab off the rank. There is an expected loss of impact because of that and "Creator" did set a high bar.
To me, the music tended to push the narration into the background.
The lyrics are sound and carry the message and response well.
I'd probably revisit "Piggies engorging in glory gutters", either "Pigs engorging in glory troughs" or "Pigs wallowing in glory gutters."
The song while a decent effort in itself suffers from the adage, "a hard act to follow."
That's why they call the genre "experimental".
A banquet of food for thought!
Sid
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Hi sid, thanks for the honest opinion. Suno had issues with troughs, so I changed it to gutters. I had the different variations of piggy, I settle with glory gutters because of the cadence. house is about the beat more than lyrics.
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Wouldn't be the first time I've had to change whole verses over Ai's aversion to certain words or sequences.
Try Peter Pecker, bloody thing has a near meltdown. Total respect for anyone who applies cadence to their lyrical works.
I tried a while back but stopped because it impacted heavily on the free-flowing style in which I come up with ideas.
Must admit, I can't distinguish between genres once it goes outside the traditional few. Your "house" sounds a lot like "EDM" to me, which also sounds the same as a dozen others! Usually throw a big caveat around any comments I make about music, since I know next to nothing about it.
One thing I do know, you have an exceptional talent when it comes to innovation and unique concepts, inspires me to try a whole new raft of ideas.
I thank you for that.
Sid
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Thanks for the compliment, i really appreciate it.
House is a subset of EDM. When I first started listening to EDM back in the 90's there were only a few, now there are thousands of variations. Gotta love human and their ability to sub-categorize :) If you ever want to get on your spouse's nerve, put on some good ole' drum and bass.. nothing like the steady - thump, thump, thump to get the nerves going :)
Your lyrics are more story-telling, than mine. you can paint picture with words.
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I saw that you wrote the words to this. It would also be interesting to feed an AI your previous lyrics and see how it would respond - though that might be against the rules of this site!!
I like this one. It feels theatrical. I'm kinda the opposite to Sid here! I really like the piggies line - feels like it fits to me.
I enjoyed it, found it a bit more accessible.
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Thanks, owen. , All my songs my words :) A few weeks back I had ChatGPT generate lyrics based on my style and it struggled. I'm considered an outlier, oddly enough :)
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I can well believe it! But always interesting!
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I like the lyric a lot. The music not so much. It seems to be just a distraction, as the lyric is pretty much spoken over it like a poem. Nothing wrong with that, but the increases in intensity and volume seem oddly random.
I'm on Team Owen, when it comes to the piggies line. I really like it. The alliterated "g" sound is great for expressing a kind of contempt felt by the machine. I'd change "engorging" to "gorging." It flows better and (to me) seems more correct as 'engorging" is rarely used intransitively. Also, with all the references to war and slaughter preceding this line, would "gory" not be more appropriate than "glory?"
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@OnlyGavin - Thanks for the comment. The music seems to be hit and miss with people :). gorging does flow better. gory gutters would be more visceral, make a bigger impact. thanks for the suggestions..
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