Tick-Tock
This is from my perspective only, not directed at anybody or anything.. just me musing
Lyrics - me / Music / Vocals by AI
https://suno.com/song/d1fcf522-c2e3-4868-83b7-19a7dcfb5747
[Verse 1]
This Warm summer's day a band plays
On a stage of songs of yesterdays
Painted smiles on contorted faces
Strumming patterns of equal paces
[Chorus]
Tick-tock four fours on the clock
Bounded by time, chained to a rock
Tick-tock three fours on the clock
Still bounded, but different rock
[Verse 2]
See the street lined with crowds
Of empty faces hidden in shrouds
Mindless lockstepping is the band
Playing the same tune, rather bland
[Chorus]
Tick-tock four fours on the clock
Bounded by time, chained to a rock
Tick-tock three fours on the clock
Still bounded, but different rock
[Verse 3]
Mechanical sounds whirring along
Playing different tunes of songs
A man waves ten for them to away
For this style is not for today
[Chorus]
Tick-tock four fours on the clock
Bounded by time, chained to a rock
Tick-tock three fours on the clock
Still bounded, but different rock
[Bridge]
See the old man rock his rocker
Once a rocker now an old mocker
Waving his cane with much disdain
Humming tunes of old, tired refrains
[Outro]
Tick-tock the sands of time march on
The old man screams to be off his lawn
Tick-tock a movement in music evolution
Generational opined noise pollution
Comments
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That’s a very catchy chorus man
Good job lyrically0 -
Doesn't convey much to me, I'm afraid.
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@RainyDayMan - owen, that's fine.. I didn't expect it to resonate.. it's really my take on people who, throughout time, has always complained about the new music come out.. and my boredom with music and how AI music to me, is game changer. it' next in the music evolution.. they said the same thing when EDM first came out,...
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@ElvisNash - thanks. I like the chorus also,
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Some people hear only what they want to hear, and comment based on who's sayin' it.
That's life, and all forums reflect the outside world, like it or not.
The song's no better or worse than dozens of CW songs posted on here over the age.
Many praised to the high heavens, others at best ignored. But you knew that anyway!
If you've got somethin' to say then sing it, maybe just change your name if your lookin' for plaudits.
Nice one Bill, reminds me of one I wrote a while back, called the Minstrel and the Fool, think I'll dig it out.
Sid
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@sidshovel - I’d be interested in hearing it. Think I’ll start a new genre called sarcastic abstraction 😂1
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@sidshovel for the comment0
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@bhengen while I don't agree with the message as in the boredom of non-AI music because I don't find it boring at all, I love seeing you use your poetic license to express precisely how you feel.
It just occurred to me the advent of AI being used more widely is like the old Memorex advertising slogan: "Is it real, or is it Memorex?." LOL! 😍 Might have to write one, "Is it real, or is it AI"? This would not downplay AI just as the slogan up-played, Memorex.
Renee
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@HummerWisdom -renee my problem is that I hear a lick and it reminds me of a dozen songs. In all new genre your always going to have detractors, look at jazz1
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@bhengen what's a lick? (just kidding!) 😍
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