What’s The World Buying v 2
Here’s what I’m gona do
I’m diggin my bag of tools
Pull out a little prank
Laugh it all the way to bank
Watch the fools lay around droolin
All the trusted souls are lying
Everybody wants to keep flying
That’s what the hell is this world buying
They’re yelling for more of a whole lot less
Can’t hear what they say but they keep crying
Money in their hands it’s mystyfing
Like getting beat for the shit is intoxifying
Long about tonight six dirty
Step outside for some light
take a big nice of the spice
Got a good joke for the crowd tonight
Watch the fools layn around sloppy
All the trusted souls went flying
I got sompin cookin on the frying
Look at me straight in the eye now
That’s what the hell is this world buying
Break—
Same old dreams dust off the rust
Jack up the price yeah that looks nice
Yeah that look nice
Fade
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@StoneFlowers somehow, I landed straight on this version. Little crammed for time right now but listening to this version now and will check back later for the other versions. I can't help but agree with this lyric. Right now, the world is f'd!
PS: still waiting on your take on some of the crap I came up with on your Kid Again song. Unless I missed it!
Renee
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@StoneFlowers - great lyrics.. good sentiment.
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@StoneFlowers - ok read your comment in V1. this is my honest opinion.. Sonu is better than V1 but tied on V2.. what's missing for me in V2 is the harmonica, as I picture you on a bar stool with a harmonica around your neck.
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Though I like to take a optimistic view on the world in songs
I can understand the pessimistic view also
Nice playing man , good song
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Liked version 2 better than version 1. I loved the vocal treatment. . . but feel like it could use some of your own artistic vision and I would like it done that way WITH your artistic input better than I liked this. Just one guy's opinion. Am I wrong in thinking that this vocal was A.I., and not you?
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Hey thanks all for your comments. This was my first experience with an AI created song. I have to admit the Suno version kinda wowed me. I can see where it could be very seductive to just let it do all the full band creation...leaving me not full filling my creativity. So I'm gonna have to double down on just me and a guitar. And learn more about LogicPro
@HummerWisdom Hey thanks for those lyrics Renee. There maybe a complete song there, got it on my create list.
@bhengen Harmonica!! Yes let me see if I can add it in, great idea.
@Hardtwistmusic Thanks for your kind words. The only AI derived piece was in the Suno version
@ElvisNash Yeah seems like I can't get rid of all the Chinese made junk in my life, every time I throw something out two more things show up
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Yeah man I hear ya man
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(V2) This is one my faves of yours. One man and a guitar. I love it. I really like the mix here as well. Crystal clear. Nice vocal and a great guitar sound. Great lyrics, but then I've come to expect that from you. Keep em comin'😀
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@StoneFlowers Very cool, Stoney! Can't wait to hear what you come up with on Kid Again song. Feel free to private message me to take it further. And now I need to get back to this song, the different versions. Smart way to get feedback!
Renee
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Hey sweetie thanks for your words...I'm gonna send a private message about that kid song so we don't tie up the main stream, hang on
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