Wake Up, America

Greetings Songsters!
This song, like Lost Soldier which I posted a few days ago, was also a part of the 9/11 commemorative project. The gentleman singing it, Stan Farlow, evidently makes a living off of sounding like Johnny Cash.
This song is a collaboration; lyric by me and the music by Brian Crabb and Stan Farlow. I think it came out pretty good but there are a few parts of the lyric I wish I'd written differently. Anyway, not much can be done about it now so I'm sharing this so you can just enjoy it for what it is.
When I was initially asked to write a song that Johnny Cash aka Stan Farlow could sing, I hesitated wondering if I could pull it off successfully. I recall driving in my car taking down notes to see what I could come up with. In hindsight, I'm glad I said, 'Yes'!
As I read over it again today, it does bring me a chuckle or two. I hope it does the same for you!
Yours,
Renee
For a listen to the Man in Black, revived ===> https://soundcloud.com/reneelachapelle/wake-up-america
WAKE UP, AMERICA
[Verse 1]
Friday, I woke up in Heaven; my faith has brought me here
There was no whisky on my breath, no drugs an’ no more tears
Then suddenly, I saw an angel and there stood my ‘June’
She took me by the hand and we slowly danced around the moon
[Verse 2]
Then, God put His arm around me said, “My son, you understand
The pain and sufferin’ in this world is part of a bigger plan
If there’s anyone who can get to the Believers on this earth
It’s the Man in Black and I won’t even ask you to wear your white shirt”
[Chorus]
Wake up, America
America, wake up
The Man in Black is coming back to fill your coffee cup
Wake up, America
America, wake up
It’s getting late America, wake up
[Verse 3]
Then, suddenly there appeared a glorious clock tower
And I heard a bell that God was ringin’ for the eleventh hour
And I said, “Oh, God now I understand your grief and your sorrow
The Second-Coming will bring back a better tomorrow”
[Chorus]
Wake up, America
America, wake up
‘Cuz the Man in Black is coming back to fill your coffee cup
Wake up, America
America, wake up
It’s getting late America, wake up
[Verse 4]
Then strummin’ on my guitar, a tune as lovely as June
We sang and we danced and then we laid beside the moon
Then June says, “My husband, I understand your sorrow
The Second-Coming of the Lord is gonna bring a better tomorrow”
[Chorus/Tag]
Wake up, America
America, wake up
The Man in Black is coming back to fill your coffee cup
Wake up, America
America, wake up
It’s getting late, you’d better wake up
Wake up, America
America, wake up
It’s getting late America, wake up
It’s getting late America…wake up.
© 2011, Renee La Chapelle, Brian Crabb, Stan Farlow – All Rights Reserved
Comments
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JC was pretty religious . This is a good tune , sounds a tad like JC. Be nice on promotion on this Renee , it might do well , its got that Carl Perkings sound on melody
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@ElvisNash I agree Farlow doesn't sound exactly like Cash but he's a hard one to follow as great as he was. That's why I was reluctant to even try an' write a lyric that Cash might sing. Anyway, it was a lot of fun once the lyric began flowing.
I appreciate your feedback,
Renee
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Well with current events , the song would strike a note with a lot of folks
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@ElvisNash you got that RIGHT; current events! Although, upon further study of the Scriptures, I no longer believe in a 'second coming'. I believe it all happened AD70. God's Kingdom here on earth is here and now. And yes, while we're headed for a new age, this world is a world without end as Scriptures would tell us. Anyway, the lyric does lend hope of which is always a good thing! 😊
R.
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Who knows on all that lol, anyway good message1
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