Kiss me like a lover

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[verse 1]
Kiss me like a lover, not ya Auntie Joan,
Put some passion in it, make my legs quiver,
I'm not a distant cousin, here on a visit.
leave me with a memory, I'll remember.
[verse 2]
My back to the wall, I have nowhere to go,
our bodies tight, I give myself to you.
Eyes locked, love or lust, it's hard to know,
your lips touch mine, in that instant, I knew.
[chorus]
Kiss me like a lover,
Kiss me like no other
Hold me tight, an never let me go,
in a way, that only you would know.
[verse 3]
All my world explodes, like on a movie set,
one foot gently lifts, natural but a cliche.
Try to absorb everythin', so I'll never forget,
this moment, will be a memory for me.
[chorus]
Kiss me like a lover,
Kiss me like no other
Hold me tight, an never let me go,
in a way, that only you would know.
[verse 4]
Lingers long enough, turns passion into love,
feel your arms around me, holdin' tight.
This is what, my dreams are made of,
that warm feelin', fall asleep to, every night.
[chorus]
Kiss me like a lover,
Kiss me like no other
Hold me tight, an never let me go,
in a way, that only you would know.
[bridge]
I don't want, this kiss to end,
if you could, make it last forever.
This passion, has no limits,
I never, want to finish.
[final chorus]
Kiss me like a lover,
Kiss me like no other
Hold me tight, an never let me go,
in a way, that only you would know.
[outro]
Our lips, parted slowly,
the magic spell, had broken.
I kept my eyes closed,
savourin', every moment.
Comments
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Aunti Joan π1
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Cool lyrics. Certainly tells a story ππ0
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"Auntie Joan" is certainly memorable! But it doesn't feel like something this person would say. Maybe more like "not a friend"? That's a pretty small quibble in a strong lyric. It holds together well.
Perhaps "one foot gently lifts" β "my foot gently lifts" keep it in 1st person.
I like your outro, really gives that feeling of trying to make a moment last forever
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@RainyDayMan, you should know my work by now to figure, if something in there sounds left field, it's been put there for a reason. In this case "song bait", just wondering if it would work, and it did!
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Haha I was thinking Aunt Joan was a phrase known in England that we here in the states wouldn't understand. Really good writing Sid.and the music matches up well with the sentiment of the lyric.0
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Personally, I like 'Auntie Joan'; very memorable as an opening line should be. Thank you for the reminder, Sid. Tho' this isn't my style of music, it works for the genre.
Keep 'em coming (as if I need to tell YOU that!) π you're crazier than me (or lonelier)
Renee
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Thanks Renee, not my style either, but millions of kids like this stuff, so what the hell!
The next trilogy of songs will be a lot different to this so stand by.
Sid
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@sidshovel I commend you for stepping outside your box and writing something for everyone!
Renee
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The Aunti Joan, gets your attention that's for sure
good job on it
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