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No Burning Love, No Ring of Fire.
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 Posted: Tue Jun 19th, 2012 05:05 pm
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Jakemeadows
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 No Burning Love, No Ring of Fire.
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Parked at Donnie's Diner only five miles from home
ready to talk to her pulled out my phone
I'd say I would come back forgive her and forget
but in the clear light of day, it still hurts me yet
V
Needed a reason to turn this bad thing to good
tried my best to weigh all the options I could
She can burn those sheets and we can buy another bed
trash those two pillows where they laid their cheating heads

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But the clock can't be turned back on the harm that's done
C
"It ain't no burning love,aint no ring of fire
just the smouldering embers of our love
you traded in for desire
It aint no burning love,ain't no ring of fire
v
I went inside and ordered breakfast, a coffee and a juice
while waiting stepped outside,wondering what the hell to do
She'd be waiting for my call, to hear I'll be there soon
hurts to bleeding she was cheating there in our bedroom

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But the clock can't be turned back on the harm that's done

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It ain't no Burning Love,It ain't no Ring of Fire
Just the smouldering embers of the love
you traded in for desire
It ain't no Burning Love,It ain't no Ring of Fire
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I made that call, told her I need more time to get my head straight
then headed in the oposite direction on the inter state
C
It ain't no Burning Love,It ain't no Ring of Fire
Just the smouldering embers of the love
you traded in for desire
It ain't no Burning Love,It ain't no Ring of Fire

Last edited on Tue Jun 19th, 2012 05:07 pm by Jakemeadows

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 Posted: Wed Jun 20th, 2012 10:05 pm
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GOOD LYRICS, GOOD STORY, THE ONLY LINE THAT STICKS OUT TO ME IS:
HURTS TO BLEEDING SHE WAS CHEATING THERE IN OUR BEDROOM.

I THINK IT'S MAINLY JUST "HURTS TO BLEEDING", BUT IT COULD JUST BE ME. GOOD JOB



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 Posted: Thu Jun 21st, 2012 11:06 am
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Thanks for your feedback, I'll take a further look at that
Jake

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 Posted: Thu Jun 21st, 2012 11:07 am
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Thanks for your feedback, I'll take a further look at that
Jake

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