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 Posted: Tue Jun 12th, 2012 08:13 pm
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Remember The Night
By: Greg Snyder (2012)


V1
Remember the night

We met here

Remember the night

You found your savior near

Remember the words

He spoke through His word

Chorus
Remember tonight…

For the rest… of your life


V2
May tonight be the time

You drew your line in the sand

I pray tonight is the night

You grabbed your master’s hand

This night He has known

Since time had began


Chorus
To welcome his child…

Into His mighty… hands


Bridge
This night…. We shared

In songs and in prayer

Let’s not forget

He’s always there


Break C/G


V3
May Christ keep you safe

Wherever you may go

Someday we’ll all stand as one

Before His heavenly throne

This life is a gift

We live with Christ by our side


Chorus
Let’s all thank God above…

For the gift… of tonight





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 Posted: Sat Jun 16th, 2012 11:32 am
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Hi Greg
Another one from the heart.Best of luck with it
Jake

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 Posted: Sat Jun 16th, 2012 06:42 pm
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD. VERSE 2 IS THE ONLY ISSUE I CAN SEE WITH THIS LYRIC, I WOULD TRY TO KEEP IT ALL PRESENT TENSE VERSUS SWITCHING BETWEEN PAST AND PRESENT.

MAY TONIGHT BE THE TIME,
YOU DRAW YOUR LINE IN THE SAND,
I PRAY TONIGHT IS THE NIGHT,
YOU GRAB YOUR MASTER'S HAND,
THIS NIGHT HE HAS KNOWN,
SINCE TIME HAD BEGAN,

BUT AS ALWAYS I LOVE YOUR LYRICS YOU HAVE AN AWESOME HEART FOR WORSHIP THAT SHOWS IN ALL YOUR MUSIC, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Last edited on Sat Jun 16th, 2012 06:45 pm by bmwrigh



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 Posted: Sat Jun 16th, 2012 06:43 pm
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Last edited on Sat Jun 16th, 2012 06:44 pm by bmwrigh



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 Posted: Sat Jun 16th, 2012 07:17 pm
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Good idea, makes sense. I guess I had planned on using this as some sort of closing song and for some reason had to speak in past tense about what we all had just done. Seeing what you wrote, I don't have to. I'll try it written like you showed above and I'll let you know what transpires. You ok with me using your rewording?



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 Posted: Sat Jun 16th, 2012 08:36 pm
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YEAH, IT'S YOUR LYRICS JUST MY SUGGESTION.



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 Posted: Fri Jun 22nd, 2012 09:32 pm
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A wonderful hymn of praise to our Savior.



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 Posted: Fri Jun 22nd, 2012 10:09 pm
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Jim, thank you so much for your kind words. It's my heart when we sing to the kids we meet. I hope to have a rough demo of it soon. God bless you and have an awesome weekend...



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 Posted: Wed Jul 4th, 2012 01:06 am
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My buddy and I did this song at a local jail last Tuesday and it had grown men crying... awesome to see your "art" affecting people. Thinking about doing a live recording next time we go. Johnny Cash style :-)



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 Posted: Fri Jul 6th, 2012 04:43 pm
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That's good to hear you really have some awesome lyrics here I'm glad to hear you're getting good results with it



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