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 Posted: Thu Jun 7th, 2012 05:55 pm
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BRANDON WRIGHT
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WILL YOU POUR YOUR SPIRIT,
OUT OVER ME,
LIKE A WATERFALL,
COMPLETELY CONSUMING ME,
WILL YOU BLESS MY LIFE,
AND RENEW MY MIND,
GIVE ME A PERFECT START,

(CHORUS)
LORD, I LIFT MY HANDS,
AND I BOW MY HEAD,
I'VE SHED MY TEARS,
LORD, I'VE SAID MY PRAYERS,
AND NOW I'LL WAIT,
ON YOU TO COME,

WILL YOU LET YOUR LIGHT,
SHINE DEEP IN MY SOUL,
LIKE A LIGHTHOUSE,
THAT COMPLETELY ILLUMINATES ME,
WILL YOU LET YOUR FLAME,
BURN DEEP IN MY HEART, LIKE A BONFIRE,
COMPLETELY LONGING FOR YOU,

(BACK TO CHORUS)

WILL YOU LET YOUR WORD,
STAND STRONG IN ME,
LIKE A MOUNTAIN,
COMPLETELY RESTORING ME,
WILL YOU BLESS MY LIFE,
AND RENEW MY FAITH,
GIVE ME A PERFECT START,

(BACK TO CHORUS)

Last edited on Thu Jun 7th, 2012 09:32 pm by bmwrigh



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 Posted: Fri Mar 21st, 2014 03:17 pm
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alot said in such a short song,i liked it.

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 Posted: Tue Mar 25th, 2014 01:37 am
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Nicely written contrast between the verse and chorus... which is very important in a verse/chorus song form. The way the VERSE sections are in the form of questions for God, while the CHORUS sections state what the singer has done or will do. If you decide to add a bridge to the song, I'd suggest lines based around the pronoun 'we' to give contrast again as is recommended for BRIDGE sections.

Nice work.



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