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 Posted: Wed Nov 8th, 2006 11:25 am
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Tom Solanto
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Yeah this one is a little odd.. Its a little rough in spots still ..

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4564784&q=lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4564784&q=hi


Intro
My coat has only five buttons
You would think I would
Take it off and stay a while

Sunday morning not, a cloud in the sky
Gotta hurry up
I wanna go on with my life
In and out
1-2-3-4-5

Dont know anyone, not really sure why
Just Dont want to talk
Got the rest of the day in sight
In and out
1-2-3-4-5

Chorus
Preacher Preachin'
I'm daydreamin'
Ssomething different, happened
He called up a girl, to say a few words
I started, paying attention
She talked about, the congregations prayers
And how her blood, disease is gone
Because of the body, and because of his mercy
She's still talkin', praisin' God
She started cryin'
I started stayin'
Its as easy as
1-2-3-4-5

After all this time, I'm setteled in right
The Lord convinced me
That its all in his perfect time
Off goes the coat
1-2-3-4-5

Conviction from God, changed my life
Now I want to stay
Finally got the desire
He got me connected
1-2-3-4-5

Preacher Preachin'
I'm daydreamin'
Ssomething different, happened
He called up a girl, to say a few words
I started, paying attention
She talked about, the congregations prayers
And how her blood, disease is gone
Because of the body, and because of his mercy
She's still talkin', praisin' God
She started cryin'
I started stayin'
Its as easy as
1-2-3-4-5

Add libb..
Off goes the coat baby wooooooooooooo!

Hey Take it from me, sit down and stay a while
God can work in you
Relax and take your time
Take off your coat
1-2-3-4-5 3x

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Its five little buttons
Come on wooooooo!
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 Posted: Tue Jan 23rd, 2007 07:14 pm
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Susan Jeffries
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I'm not one to critique much but I like the concept here. You'll get it worked out. I have faith in you!

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 Posted: Wed Jan 24th, 2007 01:58 am
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Susie, I have not seen nor spoken to you in ages..

How ya been sis .. Oh man its been a long time... YOu are one of the really good ones ... I really like you and Miss your feedback.. Been a Long while

 

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 Posted: Wed Jan 24th, 2007 03:33 am
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Tom,

It was good hearing from you! I miss you too. I always read or listen to your work. Come back to see me and say hello, OK? Watching for more of your posts, too!:D

Susan

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 Posted: Sun Aug 19th, 2007 11:19 am
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Tom, liked the approach and the message in the song.  5 Buttons is a great example of how little it really costs us sometimes, to be in the right place at the right time.  Cool musical arrangement too! :D



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