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 Posted: Tue Jan 17th, 2012 10:41 pm
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Canyontide
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Mid century style song about love, in Hakalau Hawaii :)

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 Posted: Sun Jan 22nd, 2012 02:35 pm
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Nice song.  I liked the beach feel and the retro feel of the song.  This song reminded me of some of Donald Fagen's solo work and I could see him singing this.



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 Posted: Sun Jan 22nd, 2012 04:25 pm
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Hank..Thank you! The fact that you got the beachy and vintage feel is awesome! I appreciae you taking the time to listen and comment! :))



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 Posted: Sun Jan 22nd, 2012 07:44 pm
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It's very catchy! I found myself singing it 5 minutes after it stopped!



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 Posted: Sun Jan 22nd, 2012 10:31 pm
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Thanks, Cellard! That's great to know! I think that's one of the best comments I could get on a song! I appreciate you commenting and listening :)



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 Posted: Thu Jun 28th, 2012 12:25 am
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Real nice write and well sung. One litle critique in the production side, I found the bass quite muddy and boomy maybe just a little eq tweak could remedy that and put a real gloss on the sound.

But overall a very good song well played and sung.

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 Posted: Thu Jun 28th, 2012 12:55 am
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seriousfun wrote:
Real nice write and well sung. One litle critique in the production side, I found the bass quite muddy and boomy maybe just a little eq tweak could remedy that and put a real gloss on the sound.

But overall a very good song well played and sung.


Seriousfun..Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think! :) As for the production, yes, I'm not very good at producing or engineering..I'm sure the mix could use a lot of work..hehe! Thank you for the suggestion..it's much appreciated!



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