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Always a chance this could use a bridge.  Maybe not.  Could have put a harmony on the chorus.  Fun to sing.

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James Number Two

Copyright 2012 Wyatt Grayson

The radio preacher is talking to me
On 75 going south
I rolled up my window, I'm watching my speed
To hear what he's talking about

CHORUS:
He hung on the cross for the sins of us all
You made Him the Lord of your heart
You think that's all, you think you've done your part
But that's not where it ends, it's just where it starts

If I'm not mistaken, if I understand
There's something I should know
But I'm losing the signal the farther I drive
And I'm late for where I need to go

CH

I've lost it completely, there's nothing but air
It seemed like he's speaking the truth
I'm surfing the channels to see if he's there
There's nothing but music and news

CH

I asked my brother and his friend Joe
I asked my sister, too
I asked my mother and she said go
Read James number two

CH

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Original idea with a guy listening to radio and getting beyond the range of the station.  Nice work.

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2012 post, Hey Wyatt lose some of the words in lyric lines to get your vocals to settle in, but we know that now, nice song great chorus man.

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This is very good, I like it a lot; thanks for sharing.

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"Just as the body without spirit is dead, so is faith without works"

Very nice! :)

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I am a traditional country guy who also likes gospel, because it is very close at times and always sang with heart. Nice one!


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