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Our Fathers Song (demo)
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 Posted: Sun Nov 20th, 2011 08:09 pm
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southerngospel1
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Hi everyone. This is a link to my demo. Let me know what you think!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFD9GTs86J4&feature=youtube_gdata_player


Our Fathers Song
Verse 1

When He got it all started
Our father sang a song
It was all about creation
And he knew he wasn't wrong

He started with the basics
That he knew we all would need
Like the heavens and the earth
 he simply spoke and they were seen

Chorus:
Our fathers song.... Ohhh
Our fathers song...
He knew it would ne-ver be wrong
Hes been singing since the beginning
it's a song with no ending
Our fathers song ohhh 
Our fathers song. 

Verse 2

When he got it all started 
He was thinking of you and me
He breathed life into Adam 
And then he created Eve

He gave them one commandment 
Do not eat of the tree
 They lost the battle with the devil
So it bound you and me

Repeat chorus

Verse 3

Thats when he made it so simple He gave  his only begotten 
Believe in Jesus my son 
Or be lost and forgotten

So Make only one choice
Sing the song of salvation
And when you get to heaven
 you'll get to hear his voice
 then you'll sing

Repeat chorus

Last edited on Mon Nov 21st, 2011 12:41 am by southerngospel1

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 Posted: Sun Nov 20th, 2011 08:26 pm
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Dennis Railey
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 Please hit your edit button and include the lyrics to your song.

 Thanks!



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