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 Posted: Sat Jun 3rd, 2006 12:04 am
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BREATH OF AIR

(c )2006Debbie Dant

v1
Sometimes you'll get a wind of change
that blows you off your feet,
When you're fists are clenched,
 just standing there,
it's neither victory nor defeat.
Don't let the fear of choosing
be what holds you in your place
For there are many
 who just can't be wrong,
they[re happy living in GOD'S grace

Chorus:
 He[s The Breath of Air
that I'm Breathing
 He's the reason I'm alive,
without His Breath of Air that I'm breathing,
there's no way, I could survive.

v2
This world is full of choices
that each one of us must make
without the proper frame of mind
sometimes we make mistakes
Temptations of this world
are all around should we embrace
but when we free our souls from it
the pain of sin will be erased.

Chorus:

v3
Sometimes  I'd try to forge ahead
and do it my own way
but for my stubborn waste of time
I'd always have to pay
for if  I had been listening
 I'd known just what to do
 to have that peace inside my heart
 that only GOD  gives you.

Chorus:
 
v4
It took a lot of falling down
but I never was alone
There's just no way
I had the kind of strength
to keep on rising on my own
Don't you know that GOD is with you
even when you can not see,
HE'S in the BREATH OF AIR that you're breathing
if youll only just believe.

Chorus:

 

Please bear with me ,regarding the vocal,as I am not the "real singer"

Thanks for your time.The vocal might be uploaded into the music databases soon if I sent it correctly. Thanks to Mike.
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Last edited on Sat Aug 25th, 2007 06:25 pm by miraclebaby



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 Posted: Tue Nov 28th, 2006 04:12 pm
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I believe that I read this before.  Not sure what you changed, but I love the lyric and will go to listen.  Thank you for posting.



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 Posted: Fri Dec 1st, 2006 03:10 pm
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Thanks for taking the time. Mike just posted the new version in the music database of Gospel. Please keep in mind, I am not a singer and have no music talents so "pay no attention to the goof behind the curtain" LOL. Debbie



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 Posted: Sat Dec 2nd, 2006 04:51 pm
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miraclebaby,
you have a great way of putting the meanings together. Keep at it and one day you'll top the stars ;) At least I know I enjoy your inspiration and look forward to more from you!! BTW, you're not a goof, if that's what you meant...LOL)

Susan

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 Posted: Sat Aug 18th, 2007 11:11 pm
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Debbie, I really like this.  Haven't heard it yet, but this is truly very good.:D



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 Posted: Sat Aug 25th, 2007 06:18 pm
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Thank-You so much Terrypicker,for taking the time to read. I realize it seems very wordy, but with appropriate music , I think it could work! Thanks Again!



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 Posted: Sun Sep 2nd, 2007 03:28 am
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Sis again what a beautiful song again gurl would you leave the chorus alone How about this for a chorus? Not trying to write your song for you but this is what I heard from day one when I first read the song and I offered suggestions. The verses are perfect and came from a long way. God bless and long time no hear! Much luv and respect ~darappsongstress~

 

You're the air that I breathe

The reason I'm alive

Without your love and mercy

There's no way I could survive

When I've just about lost my breath

from life anxieties

Lord you are my my life support

The air that I breathe


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 Posted: Mon Sep 3rd, 2007 01:31 am
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Thanks for having another look at the song. I actually have not made any changes since June of 2006.I appreciate the suggestions. I am still reflecting on the chorus,just sorta taking a pause for inspiration.(Working on another song right now...My Best to You and , I do appreciate your thoughts.This recent post has me Back on it though....:D



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