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 Posted: Thu May 4th, 2006 05:42 pm
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Tom Solanto
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This is vocal work in progress as usual :)




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Shine
I want to shine with love that pours out from within
Love
To show love Because of what he did
Give
I want to give with no return.. Just for him

CH
I hope they see me as a selfless man
Gentle because of the holy lamb.
Lord let it show, without spoken words
Just a way of life, just who I am
I hope they see me as a selfless man

V2
Believe
I believe he is the way the truth and the life
Share
I want to share his love with someone tonight
See
Lord let them see your holy sacrifice

Bridge
If one man comes to me
And I just turn away
I have failed the King
This will not happen today!

CH
I hope they see me as a selfless man
Gentle because of the holy lamb.
Lord let it show, without spoken words
Just a way of life, just who I am
I hope they see me as a selfless man
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Last edited on Thu May 4th, 2006 05:45 pm by Tom Solanto

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 Posted: Thu May 4th, 2006 06:54 pm
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gene weaver
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Good work Tom, really enjoyed the song

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 Posted: Fri May 5th, 2006 04:19 pm
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I think a really good vocal would make all the difference, I see you said it's in progress...so that's a good thing....I liked it...nice message...good strong hook..



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 Posted: Fri May 5th, 2006 04:56 pm
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Tom Solanto
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Hi guys I did a big reversal in the vocals and softened it up a bunch.. I was wondering what you thought

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 Posted: Fri May 5th, 2006 10:26 pm
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Sounds good Tom I think I like this one best

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 Posted: Sat May 6th, 2006 08:00 am
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Thanks Gene..

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 Posted: Sun Jun 4th, 2006 04:15 pm
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Tom,

I have listened to all your songs and there are a couple that I felt in a very deep way. Keep up the wonderful work! You have a great talent.......

suzie

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 Posted: Sun Jun 4th, 2006 04:21 pm
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Geez Susie, Thank you .. You are so sweet... It means a lot than some people like my music..

I like your new picture by the way  :)

 

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 Posted: Sun Jun 4th, 2006 04:35 pm
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Tom, I'm sure many people love your music. It's full of such meaning, how could they not enjoy hearing it!!:D

As for the pic, thanks. I was sailing in the Caribbean to the UK, from Martinique Island in that pic. It was wonderful. A good summertime avatar....maybe? Now I'll have to come up with a new one for Fall, LOL It's just for fun.

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 Posted: Sun Jun 4th, 2006 11:12 pm
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Mr. Tom Solanto;

 What an excellent Contemporary Gospel Song and a great  voice to go with it. I strongly believe this is a hit song. Get ready for your blessings. Your song ushered me into the presence of the Almighty. Such a sweet flow of annointing. It sounds perfect the way it is unless you are going to adlibb and redo the vocals because the lyrics are great as is.

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 Posted: Mon Jun 5th, 2006 02:23 am
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nice tune and great thread,good luck and god bless

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Tom

Your chorus takes off nicely, adds to the flow of the song.  You should add ABBA to your 70s influences because I heard some ABBA in your intro.

Jim



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 Posted: Fri Feb 29th, 2008 12:09 pm
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Thank you Jim Great idea.. Boy you pulled up an oldie LOL thanks man

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 Posted: Fri Feb 29th, 2008 02:52 pm
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Hey Tom: I don't think I met you before (here anyways :)) so nice to meet you! Jim did really pulled out an old one! Just wanted to say that I checked out your soundclick page and I am very impressed - especially by production level and skills.  Although Christian music is not really my cup of tea, but I found that musically your pieces are very well done and brought to shining completion. Great guitar work, keyboard and overall orchestration! I wonder if you do all the recording yourself? What tools are you using?

Nice meeting you!



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