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 Posted: Sun Apr 16th, 2006 08:12 pm
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This was done a few years ago at a friend of mines house. We just used a drum machine, and I sang harmony with myself...


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 Posted: Sun Apr 16th, 2006 11:40 pm
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Penny all I can say about this is I LOVE IT!!! Great vocals and the song is just as great Thumbs up on this one. would love to hear some more of your work

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 Posted: Mon Apr 17th, 2006 09:10 am
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Penny, Wonderful song, great vocals, very uplifting. Thanks for posting it. Beautiful lyrics.:Angel:



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 Posted: Mon Apr 17th, 2006 10:37 am
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Penny, this is a very good song and well done.  Nice vocal. 



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 Posted: Sat May 27th, 2006 12:41 am
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I love the lyrics to your song. One question though.  This sounds like a victory praise kind of song and I think you shouldn't end so quick because by the time you finish with your song you want believers as well as unbelievers to surrender their burdens, baggage, sins etc;; Otherwise the song is excellent. perhaps add on to the hook surrender it all to the Lord surrender your sins, illnesses, frailties, brokenheart... and so fort because for some reason I hear a choir coming in at the end the right instruments perhaps violins will be excellent and a beat something like you already have and your vocals are powerful girl.  God bless you.

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 Posted: Sat May 27th, 2006 01:15 am
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Good lyrics they have bite and a good tune and beat and singing.I don't know what else you need.Maybe fame to get you on the radio and tellie.Good shoutin'Johnny

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 Posted: Thu Jun 1st, 2006 02:15 pm
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Penny,

Great song. I enjoyed listening..good job! Made me feel pretty good:D

Susan

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 Posted: Fri Jun 2nd, 2006 02:02 pm
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Mike??  I can't get this one to play..



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 Posted: Sat Jun 24th, 2006 07:00 pm
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Hey there Penny.

Very nicely done Sister!
The harmonies are excellent. If I had not known that you sang harmonies with yourself I would have bet that there was a harmonizer involved :)

I love it just like it is! I think it would make a great "Sneak track" on a CD project. Drum machine and all.

Blessings to you!

Q.

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 Posted: Sat Jun 24th, 2006 09:30 pm
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Hi Quincy... Hey thanks for the review... I see you are from Washington, I'm from Oregon... The Dalles, what part of Washington are you in?

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 Posted: Sat Jun 24th, 2006 11:25 pm
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Hi there Penny!

I live in Longview Washington. I am about 45 minutes south of Vancouver WA.

We have some family in Vancouver and go there frequently. We also have family in Dallas which I know is not the same as The Dalles.

We are fairly new to this area of the US. We've only been here for about a year and a half. Originally from Southern Cal. then to OHIO then off to Maryland back to Indiana and then here. Wow I got tiredjust typing that ;)

Ministry has moved me quite a bit.

Been involved in music for many years mostly Christian but have done other as well. I love to perform but Songwriting is my heart.

How about you?:)

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 Posted: Sun Jun 25th, 2006 04:08 pm
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Hi guys,Washington that's just over a ways from Alberta,you're a minister eh Quincy, what kind? Great song again! Penny,well on with summer,have a great one Johnny

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 Posted: Sun Jun 25th, 2006 06:30 pm
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Yes, I was ordained 2001 to the Gospel Ministry by a Southern Baptist Church in Maryland. I have been in the ministry full time since 94. Most of my church ministry has been in the associate Pastor and Worship Pastor area. I also perform regularly with a band playing Christian Classic Rock. God is good and continues to give me opportunities to minister in His name regularly. Thanks for asking.

Sorry Penny for telling my life story in your post. Would enjoy hearing more about your music.

Q.

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 Posted: Sun Jan 28th, 2007 07:20 pm
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Sending this one to the top once more!

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 Posted: Sun May 13th, 2007 05:00 pm
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Can't believe I missed this one for so long!  I love it just the way it is recorded here!  What a beautiful Sunday morning this is.



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 Posted: Fri Aug 3rd, 2007 03:32 pm
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Loved it, Penny.  Great job.  Thanks for posting. :D 



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