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 Posted: Wed Apr 5th, 2006 01:18 am
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Posted by TSF-Mike (Any changes or modifications please contact me)

It Shall Not Always Be Like This
Copyright Yvonne Perkins


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 Posted: Wed Apr 5th, 2006 01:26 am
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very good song here I like it and the vocals are great, you are very talented

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 Posted: Wed Apr 5th, 2006 10:45 am
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The vocal is much stronger on this one and I agree with Gene, it is also a very good song, and you are indeed talented. 

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 Posted: Sun Apr 9th, 2006 03:23 pm
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A much clearer vocal and another nice song,good gospel,Johnny

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 Posted: Sun Apr 9th, 2006 03:32 pm
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Very nice, groovy demo with great vocal.  :)  Nothin' like some good sax to bring things alive.  Super.

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 Posted: Sat Apr 15th, 2006 05:59 pm
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Good upbeat gospel song. Makes ya' boogie to the Lord!!!!!!!!!! Vocal sounded great!!!!!!!!:D Great weekend for that Yvonne!! Thanks for sharing!

Susan

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 Posted: Sun Apr 16th, 2006 07:46 pm
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Hello.. I like the sound of this...  Cool sax.. 

Good Job..

 

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Yvonne,

Cool, catchy gospel.  I like this one.

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 Posted: Tue Apr 18th, 2006 04:21 pm
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I usually don't do gospel, but this is cool. Very nice demo. Very nice vocal, is that you singing? You go girl!



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 Posted: Wed Apr 19th, 2006 04:36 pm
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Yvonne, very nice production of this tune.
However I do have some nits about it.

First is: I wish you had posted the lyrics
along with the song even if you had to
post them in another post underneath.

Secondly: The song while sounding good
was a bit redundant in music composition.

1 ~ 4 ~ 1 ~ 4 ~ 1 ~ 4

It needs some musical deviations. It needed
some breaking up and some breaks.

This is just my opinion which don't count for much
as I am just a nobody :)

But thanks for the listen as I'll keep listening
when you post as you have potential :)



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 Posted: Wed Apr 19th, 2006 05:31 pm
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Jeff has a good point about the repetitious chord progression, but the vocal melody changes along with the sax holds my interest.

I also agree that posting the lyrics would be helpful! That is, of course, if you want opinions from all us other nobodies, LOL!



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 Posted: Wed Apr 19th, 2006 07:09 pm
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Yvonne,

Great tune and production job !!:Excited:

You are a very talented individual indeed. Keep writing those good songs.

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 Posted: Sun Apr 23rd, 2006 11:27 pm
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mikemclaughlin wrote: I usually don't do gospel, but this is cool. Very nice demo. Very nice vocal, is that you singing? You go girl!
Thanks MIke

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 Posted: Sun Apr 23rd, 2006 11:33 pm
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Jeff Knight wrote: Yvonne, very nice production of this tune.
However I do have some nits about it.

First is: I wish you had posted the lyrics
along with the song even if you had to
post them in another post underneath.

Secondly: The song while sounding good
was a bit redundant in music composition.

1 ~ 4 ~ 1 ~ 4 ~ 1 ~ 4

It needs some musical deviations. It needed
some breaking up and some breaks.

This is just my opinion which don't count for much
as I am just a nobody :)

But thanks for the listen as I'll keep listening
when you post as you have potential :)
Hi JeffYou are right on the money with your critique, I wanted more of a bridge to the song but they didn't pick it up (I send a cassette recording with my limited singing abilities so I can't blame them if it didn't come through that I was attempting to do a bridge)  I don't know how to post the lyrics on this site.  :?

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