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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2009 12:59 am
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An Hour!!! Geesh, I only get an half hour :( I've got A LOT of lyrics written down that have no music... but all of my music has lyrics!:Guitarman1:

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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2009 02:30 pm
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Really cute lyric, something women will love (guess I'm disagreeing with Rainyday Man and he's one of my co-writers ;) Ha!).  This is a catchy little tune too! 



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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2009 02:38 pm
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Thanks Brenda! That's what my wife said too! Just trying to cover all my bases. :) It's definitely a simple little song as far as they lyrics go.



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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2009 05:45 pm
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Way to go Randy... it was well worth the wait. I listened to this yesterday and was meaning to comment on it... but I had a real busy day and never got a chance to. When I first heard it... I thought that it had a feel about it... but couldn't put my finger on it.... but after seeing some of the comments from others... I realized that it does have sort of a Blind Melon feel to it. Not saying that it is totally but has that influence. There are very few people that have their own sound without some outside infuence... even the Beatles had their influences... so it is not meant to be demeaning. I really liked it and can listen to it over and over. Great Job!



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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2009 07:55 pm
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Yet another catchy and interesting tune from you.  Very cool.  I do think you still need to bring your voice up front and dial down the vox f/x a tad.  Your voice works better than you might think.  :cool:



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 Posted: Mon Dec 14th, 2009 06:21 pm
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Gary - Glad you liked it. I definitely don't take it as demeaning to sound like someone as long as it's not too much like someone. It's very interesting to see what you sound like to other people. And I'm a Blind Melon fan so that is very cool.

Wave - Thanks a ton. The next song I do will have the vocals up front more. We'll have to see about the fx though! :)



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