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| Posted: Sun Mar 19th, 2006 04:47 pm |
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Susan Jeffries
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Thank You Lord For Saving Me
Some day I will be laid to rest (8)
And flowers will brighten the room (8)
My soul will go where life is best (8)
In God’s home I’ll sing Him a tune (8)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
How do I deserve Your love (7)
You died, so I could be free (7)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
You know all I have done on earth (8)
Just a sinner so unworthy (8)
All through my life, since my birth (8)
Seems I followed ways so worldly (8)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
How do I deserve Your love (7)
You died, so I could be free (7)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
I’ve read your word from end to end (8)
Genesis to Revelation (8)
Ten commandments, Beatitudes (8)
And all of its declarations (8)
Some day I will be laid to rest (8)
And flowers brighten the room (8)
My soul will go where life is best (8)
In God’s home I’ll sing Him a tune (8)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
How do I deserve Your love (7)
You died, so I could be free (7)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
Thank you Lord, for saving me (7)
You died so I could be free (7)
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Last edited on Sun Mar 19th, 2006 06:20 pm by Susan Jeffries
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| Posted: Sun Mar 19th, 2006 07:35 pm |
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I have difficulty critiquing this genre of song,I know how hard they usually are to write, I like this one it's so honest Johnny
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| Posted: Sun Mar 19th, 2006 09:13 pm |
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Susan Jeffries
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Johnny, Thank you and it is hard to critique this type of song.  I made it as honest as I could!!! Susan Thanks for reading it!!!!!
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| Posted: Sun Mar 19th, 2006 09:31 pm |
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Hi Susie I like the lyric just one thing you may want to change or even just eliminate
I’ve read your word from end to end (8)
Genesis to Revelation (8)
Ten commandments, Beatitudes (8)
And all of its declarations (8)
I does not seem to fit anywhere in the lyric.. I think I would just eliminate it..
Good work as usual
TOm
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| Posted: Fri May 5th, 2006 01:54 am |
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Susan Jeffries
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Tom...Thank you for the input... you have a valid point here. I will have to look at it and revise it for a better lyric. I appreciate your comments as usual
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| Posted: Fri May 5th, 2006 10:31 pm |
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Good story and a real good message, Kind of a testimonial type song really good Tom does have a good point on the one verse
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| Posted: Sat May 6th, 2006 11:07 pm |
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Susan Jeffries
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Thanks Gene!! Coming from you is a big compliment!! I agree with both of you on the one verse...that's why I'm here, to get good help with my lyrics...thanks again!!!
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Yep, I remember that one.. Man, praise God she knew where she was going. So many do not... Imagine the joy right now.. Man She met Jesus.. Woah! man.. I hope I am as ready as she was.
Thanks Brenda.
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Praise God! You precious lady.
I really appreciate her Testimony
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Uh-Huh!
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