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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:21 pm
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C2 wrote: Great job Denny Ray did on that vocal. Very Vincent Pricey.

I'm for knowing what the story details are too. What weapon did he have, or even worse use?

 Denny Ray thanks you, Curtis, but he aint no Vincent Price and never will be.  The weapon came from seeing kids trick or treat and carrying the toy light sabers no matter what costume they had on... and if you didn't catch the explanation I gave to Owen in an above post, the story is about a kid dressed up as a ghost and out trick or treating on halloween.  The fear he saw in people was pretend of course, but the kid was living the scene described in the poem.  He may be coming to pay you a visit soooooooooooooon!!!! :shock:



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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:25 pm
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James Ryce wrote: Very good ... look forward to hearing the more scary version!  The effects would be good.

James.

 Thanks, James!  I hope to get it done in stereo tonite... if you'd like to do this one and put it on your next CD just let me know and we'll work out a deal.  Don't worry, I won't ask for too much $ in advance. :D



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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:27 pm
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Kevin Pearson wrote: Dennis,

Nice job....I'm not opening my door this Halloween for sure.

Kevin

 Thanks, Kevin!  You're just to cheap to buy any candy to give away and you're playing the fear card to get out of it... I know your type! :X



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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:38 pm
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SundownSam wrote: Kevin Pearson wrote:
....I'm not opening my door this Halloween for sure.



Me neither!!!! :shock: LOL

Very nice Dennis!  Neat Halloween poem you got there!  And you've topped it off nicely with some eerie spooky music, a deep-throated scary voice reciting it and some really cool background sound effects!  But after reading and listening I have a favor to ask of you....please don't come knocking at my door this Halloween!!!!! :)  hehe

 Another tightwad huh?  (see reply to Kevin)

 Thanks, Sara, I haven't written a poem since my school days, but I was trying to think of something to do for halloween and this is what I came up with.  Don't worry, I won't be coming to your door... but just remember, it's Denny Ray that you need to worry about and I can't control him... that monkey's got a mind of his own!!!   :)



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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:43 pm
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Brenda McBryde wrote: THANK YOU!!  That is really cool, I'll play it for the kids tonight!!!
 Thank you!  I hope your kids can get that stupid music out of their heads... I can't and it's driving me crazy!!! ... crazier!!! :shock:



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 Posted: Fri Oct 30th, 2009 07:50 pm
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John99 wrote: :shock::shock:.........I was Skeeeeert:shock:..............LOL...Great Job Dennis on both the voice and the write!
Thanks, John!  Sorry I skeeeert ya, it happens with alot of my songs... it's usually the "voice and the write" that does it too! :(



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