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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 08:13 pm
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Tom Solanto
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THis one is a bit of a screamer LOL
 
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I walk alone
Amongst these city lights
Sleet and Rain chill my skin
It's a cold ugly life

'Nother cigarette
Not enough to satisfy
Turn into an alley way
Shared a butt with rats and mice

I'm crying out
Can't take the things I'm seein'
So I'm crying out
Gotta change the way of Livin'
Cryin out 

The trash stinks
Like a magots rat race
I've got no business here
Gotta leave this place

Feeling delerious
I sat upon a step
Man opens up the door
He Asked if he could help

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He read some scripture
Showed me the truth
One man made the difference
Now I've someone to run to
Oh Lord it's you!

Started crying out
Can't take the way I'm goin'
I'm crying out
such hope this man is showin'
So I'm cryin out

The one I can run to
The one I can turn to
I'm finally forgiven
Cause I cried out to you

crying out
Gonna change the way I'm livin'
I'm crying out
Oh Lord I've been forgiven
So I'm cryin out

Oh Lord It's you
Oh Lord It's you
I've been cryin to

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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 08:32 pm
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 Tom, good song!  I like the powerful feel of it, it puts you in the guys place.  Love the end... "Oh Lord it's you.. I've been cryin to"

 Enjoyed it!



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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 08:47 pm
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Thank you Dennis.. really appreciate the listen and review

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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 09:15 pm
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 You're welcome.... keep on posting!



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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 11:23 pm
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Tom, this one gave me chills! As I was listening to it I visualized the man wandering the streets, cold, wet and feeling dejected!  Then he is shown the way through scripture!  But the ending is what got me when he says... oh Lord it's you I've been crying too!  I felt goose-bumps on my arms!  LOL



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 Posted: Thu Mar 19th, 2009 11:34 pm
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Wow Sam, that is more than I could have asked for.. Thank you so much for your feedback.. I really appreciate it.

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