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Arthur Holt
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Thought I would post this here to see how it would go, comments are welcome

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=4742604

                       My Harley Girl    © 12/5/04 byArthur Holt

She comes blowing in the breeze----All her fringes are
shakin', when she goes by my whole body starts achein',
cause her pipe's are so loud I feel my  heart is breakin'
cause that's my "Harley Girl" that I'm chasing---- and

chorus     
It must be love that keeps me around and I can't keep
My feet on the ground with out her " MY Harley Girl"

2nd verse       well


I see her in my mirror----- all her fringes are still
shakin',  when she gets nearer my whole bike starts a
quakin' -----cause her pipes are so loud It sounds like
thunders  breakin' but thats my " Harley Girl" that I
    love chasing            and   

chorus        
It must be love that keeps me around and I can't keep
my feet on the ground with out her " MY Harley Girl"

Solo

Bridge
And she's not going to be left behind and she not
luggage of any kind, that girl of mine , that girl of mine.

2nd verse       well


I see her in my mirror----- all her fringes are still
shakin',  when she gets nearer my whole bike starts a
quakin' -----cause her pipes are so loud It sounds like
thunders  breakin' but thats my " Harley Girl" that I
    love chasing            and   

chorus      
It must be love that keeps me around and I can't keep
my feet on the ground with out her " MY Harley Girl"

" MY Harley Girl"

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Amazing that no one's commented on this one. :shock:

I really enjoyed the funky groove. :D Great toe-tapping music and a simple, fun lyric. I'll bet your wife loves the song. ;)

Donna

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It's about time we got some more biker music around here. I was startin' to get a bit lonely!! ;)

Nice groove and I really like the guitar work.

DD

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Donna wrote: Amazing that no one's commented on this one. :shock:

I really enjoyed the funky groove. :D Great toe-tapping music and a simple, fun lyric. I'll bet your wife loves the song. ;)

Donna


Hi Donna, I didn't realize it has been almost a year that I put this one up, I think I had it in open mic. and that's why it was missed.

Thank you for listening and finding this song fun. Yes my wife does love it cause it's about her. "They" , say to write about what you know so we were riding along and I look in my mirror and there's Eva ( my Wife) on her Harley behind me and this song just came  out :) sang it till we got home and wrote it down. was lots of fun .

Here's a little video I shot when we were in Strurgis 2005 with a country version.;)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7utyaSdUKw

Art

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DunedinDragon wrote: It's about time we got some more biker music around here. I was startin' to get a bit lonely!! ;)

Nice groove and I really like the guitar work.

DD


Hey DD, Us biker type's got to make some music too, thanks for commenting :)

Art

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Hi. I enjoyed this. I'm looking to write a song about a bar maid, I'm looking for some music ideas, this simple blues progression might be the ticket. E, A, B. I can handle it. ;o)

Thank's for posting this, it's nice.

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Athur,
Jest gotten round to readin it. Good one son! cb.

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Hey CB, thanks appreciate you bringing this song around again , it's kinda funny that it took almost a year to get my first comment on this song and it has been over  a year since the last comment how did you find it ha ha ha ......  that link still works that's at the top of the lyrics if you want to listen :)

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ZZ top can play this one. Good boogie sound. Fun to listen to.

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Arthur,

I like the rhythm in the backing tracks. The whole thing really flows! I tweeted you.

Jim


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