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miraclebaby
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BREATH OF AIR
I never had to look too far for challenges,
they always seemed to come smack-dab at me.
And even though I wondered
how much I could stand,
a loving hand was reaching out to me.
HE/S THE BREATH OF AIR
THAT I/M BREATHING
HE/S THE REASON I/M ALIVE
WITHOUT HIS LOVE THAT I/M NEEDING
THERE/S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
Sometimes I/d try to forge ahead,
and do it my own way,
but for my stubborn waste of time
I/d always have to pay.
For if I had been listening,
I/d known just what to do,
to have that peace inside my heart
that only GOD gives you.
HE/S THE BREATH OF AIR THAT I/M BREATHING
HE/S THE REASON I/M ALIVE
WITHOUT HIS LOVE THAT I/M NEEDING
THERE/S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
This world is full of choices
that each one of us must make,
without the proper frame of mind,
sometimes we make mistakes.
The trappings of this world,
are all around should we partake,
but when we free our souls from it,
our spirits will not ache.
HE/S THE BREATH OF AIR
THAT I/M BREATHING
HES THE REASON I/M ALIVE
WITHOUT HIS LOVE THAT I/M NEEDING
THERE/S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
(c)2004 by Debbie Dant
Last edited on Mon Oct 19th, 2009 02:51 am by miraclebaby
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Posted: Sat Feb 4th, 2006 09:11 pm |
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johnnybgoode
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love the chorus,and the theme Johnny,keep at it
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Posted: Sun Feb 5th, 2006 09:09 pm |
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love it love it love it !!
DON
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Posted: Mon Feb 6th, 2006 09:09 pm |
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miraclebaby
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Thanks Don and Johnny for checking in.. I appreciate the comments.
____________________ ~Silver Bells Debbie~
My brain is like a wet sponge~stuff leaks out as soon as it's added!:}
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Posted: Fri Feb 10th, 2006 02:52 pm |
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Nicely done! Me tooo I love this 
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Posted: Sat Feb 11th, 2006 10:55 am |
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Yea, I like this.....the verses are very strong....nice job...do we have any music to it??
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Posted: Wed Feb 15th, 2006 09:07 pm |
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Crystal, Mike put the vocal in the Gospel database for me today.
PLEASE pardon the basicness of it. I admit I was using my daughter's"Fisher Price (c)"microphone, and don't play any instrument, but" There you have it" It is sung with the original words which may yet be revised....not sure.
I hope to get some feedback ...wash or squash?
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Posted: Wed Apr 5th, 2006 09:29 pm |
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miraclebaby wrote: Revision of last verse + BREATH OF AIR
I never had to look too far for challenges,
they always seemed to come smack-dab at me.
And even though I wondered
how much I could stand,
the answer could be found on bended knee.
HE’S THE BREATH OF AIR
THAT I’M BREATHING
HE’S THE REASON I’M ALIVE
WITHOUT GOD'S (Breath Of Air)THAT I’M NEEDING
THERE’S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
Sometimes I’d try to forge ahead,
and do it my own way,
but for my stubborn waste of time
I’d always have to pay.
For if I had been listening,
I’d known just what to do,
to have that peace inside my heart
that only GOD gives you.
HE’S THE BREATH OF AIR THAT I’M BREATHING
HE’S THE REASON I’M ALIVE
WITHOUT GOD'S (Breath Of Air) THAT I’M NEEDING
THERE’S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
This world is full of choices
that each one of us must make,
without the proper frame of mind,
sometimes we make mistakes.
The trappings of this world,
are all around ,with rules to break
but when we free our souls from it,
our spirits will not ache.
HE’S THE BREATH OF AIR
THAT I’M BREATHING
HE’S THE REASON I’M ALIVE
WITHOUT GOD'S (Breath Of Air)THAT I’M NEEDING
THERE’S NO WAY I COULD SURVIVE.
(c)2004 by Debbie Dant
____________________ ~Silver Bells Debbie~
My brain is like a wet sponge~stuff leaks out as soon as it's added!:}
Debbie Dant (alias Miraclebaby)
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Posted: Wed Apr 5th, 2006 09:34 pm |
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Thanks to all who have helped me ,and those who might'a wanted to.  Last edited on Wed Apr 5th, 2006 09:39 pm by miraclebaby
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Really a nice song you've done a great job on I'll have to give this one the thumbs up
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miraclebaby
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Thank-You Gene I am eager to get it done professionally soon.
____________________ ~Silver Bells Debbie~
My brain is like a wet sponge~stuff leaks out as soon as it's added!:}
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