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 Posted: Wed Oct 1st, 2008 07:42 pm
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This song has a good message hope you enjoy it .

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGP5xvGK0TM



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 Posted: Thu Oct 2nd, 2008 01:31 pm
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Wow!  Guess I was expecting something similar to He's Able, I was surprised!!  This, also, is a very good song with some strong images in the video.  Good versatility with your style! :)



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 Posted: Thu Oct 2nd, 2008 01:40 pm
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Thanks Brenda . This song gets a lot of mixed reviews its kinda out of the ordinary .

but it has a very good message .



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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 01:52 am
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Hi,

Something to pass the time with!

I was brought up in the valley, in South Wales in a mining community. As children at weekends, we would go up and play on the mountain side. On Sundays, the choirs used to practice, and you we hear the voices in song rising up about you. In later days, my mother was buried there with
her father in that cemetary, where we played. What memories, feelings, and longings we all have!

‘I WON’T CARE’
© Lyrics & Music by F.S.KENWARD & A.R.FORTE

VERSE [ONE].
AS A CHILD I BELIEVED IN YOU
I WAS TOLD GREAT THINGS WHICH YOU STILL DO
YOU WERE THERE BESIDE ME LISTENING TO MY PRAYER
AND YOU KNEW I BELIEVED IN YOU


CHORUS.
I DON’T KNOW WHERE THEY WILL LAY MY BODY
WHEN THE TIME HAS COME FOR ME TO GO
WILL IT LAY IN TREES ABOVE THE VALLEY
WHERE DAFFODILS AND BLUEBELLS USED TO GROW
IN THE DISTANCE VOICES RAISE IN FEELING
SING THE SONGS WHICH MINERS ALWAYS DO FOR YOU
I WON’T CARE WHERE THIS OLD BODY'S LAYING
AS LONG AS MY SOUL GOES BACK TO YOU


VERSE [TWO].
IN MY LIFE I HAD THOUGHTS OF YOU
MAYBE NOT AS MUCH AS OTHERS DO
THERE WERE TIMES I FORGOT
DID WHAT I SHOULD NOT
BUT I STILL BELIEVED IN YOU


CHORUS.
I DON’T KNOW WHERE THEY. . . . . . . .

REFRAIN.
I WON’T CARE WHERE THIS OLD BODY’S LAYING
AS LONG AS MY SOUL GOES BACK WITH YOU


cb.
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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 12:00 pm
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Warren:
Any chance of posting the lyrics on this one. I liked the music but the recording is such that I really can't pick out much in terms of the lyrics.

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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 01:14 pm
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I agree with David.  Very good music, in fact mayble a little too good.  It overrides the vocal so much it's hard to understand the lyrics.  Would help a lot if you could post the lyrics.  I understand you say it has a strong messagae, but I'd like to hear what the message is.  lol.  The only clear thing I can hear is You're Gonna Burn. 



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I don't know if he is still around here, this is two years old guys.



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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 03:15 pm
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lol.  I didn't catch that, thanks Brenda. 



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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 03:20 pm
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LOL  The oddest threads get bumped up all the time.  I always wonder why newer members don't comment much on newer threads. ;)



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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2010 03:21 pm
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Hey, maybe this will bring Warren Danny out of hibernation. :D



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